Write This, Not That: College Essay Edition
Write This, Not That: College Essay Edition
Every fall, college admissions officers read thousands of essays—and many of them sound exactly the same. The right topic can make you unforgettable. The wrong one can make you blend into the background.
If you want your essay to stand out, you need to write authentically, think deeply, and avoid clichés that admissions officers have seen a thousand times.
Here’s your guide to what to write—and what to skip.
🚫 Not That: “The Big Game That Changed My Life”
✅ Write This: “What Losing the Big Game Taught Me About Leadership”
Admissions officers have read endless essays about winning championships. What stands out is the reflection that comes after failure. Focus on personal growth, humility, and how you handled adversity.
🚫 Not That: “Helping Others Made Me Feel Good”
✅ Write This: “How Volunteering Changed the Way I See Community”
Generic volunteering essays often sound the same. Instead, describe a single moment, person, or realization that shifted your mindset. Specific details and genuine emotion go much further than broad statements.
🚫 Not That: “My Parents Are My Heroes”
✅ Write This: “The Day I Learned to Be My Own Hero”
Writing about influential people is fine—but make sure you are the main character. Colleges want to learn about your journey, not just someone else’s.
🚫 Not That: “I’ve Always Wanted to Go to [College Name]”
✅ Write This: “How [College Name] Aligns With My Goals”
Admissions officers already know you want to attend their school. Instead, explain why—mention programs, professors, or opportunities that truly excite you. Be specific and personal.
🚫 Not That: “I’m Just a Normal Teenager”
✅ Write This: “Finding Meaning in the Ordinary”
You don’t need a dramatic story to write a great essay. Sometimes the best essays come from small moments—like late-night conversations, quiet reflections, or simple routines that reveal character and insight.
💡 Expert Tips for Writing a Strong Essay
Start Early: Great essays take time to discover, draft, and refine.
Be Honest: Authenticity beats perfection every time.
Show, Don’t Tell: Use vivid imagery and emotion to make your story come alive.
Reflect Deeply: The best essays answer the question, “So what did this teach me?”
🧭 Final Thoughts from College Refocus
A great college essay isn’t about impressing—it’s about revealing who you are. Admissions officers aren’t looking for perfection; they’re looking for reflection.
Write the essay only you could write—and skip the one anyone could.
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