College Essay Mistakes to Avoid


Write a Standout Essay Without Falling Into Common Traps

📌 Why Your Essay Matters

The essay is often the only part of your application where you speak directly to admissions officers.
A great essay can elevate your application—while a poorly executed one can leave the wrong impression.

🚫 Mistake 1: Writing What You Think They Want to Hear

Admissions officers can spot inauthentic essays instantly. Avoid generic “inspiration” stories unless they truly reflect your unique experience.

🚫 Mistake 2: Repeating Your Resume

Your essay shouldn’t rehash your activities list. Instead, choose a specific moment or story that reveals your personality and values.

🚫 Mistake 3: Choosing a Cliché Topic Without a Fresh Angle

Sports injuries, mission trips, and moving to a new school are fine topics—but only if you bring a unique, personal perspective.

🚫 Mistake 4: Skipping the Editing Process

Typos, awkward phrasing, and unclear structure send the wrong message. Have multiple people review your essay—teachers, mentors, or a college consultant.

🚫 Mistake 5: Ignoring the Prompt

Every word should answer the specific prompt you chose. Going off-topic can hurt your clarity and focus.

🚫 Mistake 6: Making It About Someone Else

It’s great to honor someone who inspired you, but your essay must show your growth, your insight, and your voice.

✅ Quick Tips for a Strong Essay

  • Start early—give yourself 4–6 weeks before deadlines

  • Use vivid, specific details rather than general statements

  • End with reflection on how the experience shaped you

🗣 Student Story

“I had a draft that sounded just like everyone else’s. College Refocus helped me find my real voice, and my essay became the part of my application I was most proud of.”
— Anderson SC

🎯 How College Refocus Helps

  • Brainstorm unique essay topics

  • Edit for clarity, tone, and flow

  • Ensure your essay complements the rest of your application

  • Keep you on track with deadlines

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